06年高考英语书面表达技巧指南(六)-凯发k8官网

06年高考英语书面表达技巧指南(六)
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㈥如何提高书面表达的档次,争取得高分甚至满分?

  不少同学们可能很不理解:考试时,写出的书面表达要点齐全,表达也正确,可就是不知道为什么打不上高分。是啊,为什么呢?今天,我们就来研究如何解决这个问题。

  首先让我们来看近年来全国高考英语书面表达的评分标准:第五档(很好):“覆盖所有主要内容;应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑;达到了预期的写作目的。”

  可见,高考书面表达评分标准在语言的运用上对考生提出了更高的要求。也就是说在考查考生语言准确性的基础上,进一步强调了用词的得体性、表达方式的多样性。如果同学们仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使要点齐全,表达没有语法错误,也不能给人一种含金量高的审美享受,因此很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。评分标准给我们传递了另外一个信息,如果有意识地使用较高级词汇或复杂结构,即使有些错误,也不扣分,仍属于最高档次。

  因此要使一个平淡的文章变得丰富起来,从而提高书面表达的档次。我认为同学们应着力于从以下三个方面来增强书面表达的效果。

  ⒈学会使用较高级的词汇

  词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知,运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。大家先来看下面这些句子:

  ⑴because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
  thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.

  ⑵we all think he is a great man.
  we all think 1 of him.

  ⑶suddenly i thought out a good idea.  …came upon …
  a good idea 2 to me. /a good idea suddenly struck me.
 
  ⑷the students there needn’t pay for their books.
  books are free for the students there.

  ⑸as a result the plan was a failure.
  the plan turned out (to be) a failure.

  ⑹when she heard he had died, she went pale with 3.
  at the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.

  ⑺she went to 4 in order to study music.
  she went to austria for/with the purpose of studying music.

  ⑻when he 5, he felt more and more excited.
  the more he spoke, the more excited he felt.

  ⑼in our school, there are twenty–six classrooms.
  our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms./twenty–six classrooms make up our school.

  ⑽you can find my house easily.
  you’ll have no trouble/difficulty 6 my house.

  ⒉学会使用较丰富的句式

  在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句型,要灵活运用各种语法结构,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。例如:

  ⑴when he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(使用v-ing形式)
  →on his arriving/ 7, please give me an e-mail.

  ⑵to his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句)
  →what surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
  (that the littler girl knows so many things surprises him./it surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things .)

  ⑶though i’m weak, i’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)
  →weak as i am, i’ll make the effort.

  ⑷he did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型 ①.it was… ②.not until…)
  →①it was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
  →②not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.

  ⑸i passed the physics exam because of your help.(使用虚拟语气)
  →①i could not have passed the physics exam but for your help.
  →②if you had not helped me, i could not have passed the physics exam.

  ⑹she walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (用过去分词)
  →followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.

  ⑺they sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用v-ing形式)
  →singing and laughing, they went back to school.

  ⑻i won’t believe what he says. (使用状语从句)
  →no matter what he says, i won’t believe.

  ⑼if you study hard, you will make rapid progress. (使用并列句)
  →study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.

  ⑽he had no sooner come back from beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
  →no sooner had he come back from beijing than he was sent abroad.



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1 xdfxr     
adv.高度地,极,非常;非常赞许地
参考例句:
  • it is highly important to provide for the future.预先做好准备非常重要。
  • the teacher speaks very highly of the boy's behaviour.老师称赞这个男孩的表现。
2 d69029ce18e0f2dc8f7842634f064775     
v.发生(occur 的过去分词)
参考例句:
  • the prosecution stated that intercourse had occurred on several occasions. 控诉方称发生过数次性交。
  • these changes have occurred over a long time span. 这些变化经过了很长一段时间才形成。
3 owbwi     
n.悲哀;悲痛
参考例句:
  • it helps to share your sorrow with someone else.向他人诉说你的痛苦对你是有益的。
  • i think she did it more in sorrow than in anger.我觉得她这样做更多是出于悲哀而不是愤恨。
4 syqzhp     
n.奥地利(欧洲国家)
参考例句:
  • austria lies to the southeast of germany.奥地利位于德国东南。
  • i always confuse australia with austria.我总是把澳大利亚同奥地利弄混。
5 xryyc     
n.(车轮的)辐条;轮辐;破坏某人的计划;阻挠某人的行动 v.讲,谈(speak的过去式);说;演说;从某种观点来说
参考例句:
  • they sourced the spoke nuts from our company.他们的轮辐螺帽是从我们公司获得的。
  • the spokes of a wheel are the bars that connect the outer ring to the centre.辐条是轮子上连接外圈与中心的条棒。
6 5tazve     
n.发现,发现物;调查的结果
参考例句:
  • the finding makes some sense.该发现具有一定的意义。
  • that's an encouraging finding.这是一个鼓舞人心的发现。
7 jnhyc     
n.到达,达到,到达者
参考例句:
  • she's impatient for her father's arrival.她急切地盼望着父亲的到来。
  • the new arrival was none other than the president.刚到的不是别人,正是总统。
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